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| NOT a good example of constructive feedback |
- Reread the Introduction, and label the following characteristics.If they're not present, note that for your partner.
- thesis statement.
- What process is being described
- Why is the process important
- What background information is provide
How can the intro be improved?
- Reread the conclusion, and label the following characteristics:
- paraphrased thesis statement
- positive/ending note
How can the conclusion be improved?
- What pattern of organization does the essay use? Is it clear/effective?
- Underline transition words. Are there enough, too many, not enough?
- Does each body paragraph have a clear topic sentence?Label them for each body paragraph. Does the topic sentence clearly introduce the process?
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